Very good use of statistics and great layout a lot of research which is relevant to your CI Great work maybe more examples of primary and secondary sources such as problems or an article which talks about stalking which can help to back up your information even more. secondary sources such as newspaper articles would be good.
good use of Bibliography also maybe read over your work and make sure you understand it :) x
Good notes.. write information in your own words and include examples of secondary and primary sources that you will be using.. The bibliography is good :)
Really interesting facts and figures and well presented, but not a CI plan.
ebi: I am unclear about your miniCI's objective. Is it to explore the Marshall McLuhan quotation: "Publishing is a self-invasion of privacy." If so then you could be onto something here. You would however need texts not just research data. Think about how our world is being shaped by Facebook and social networking. WHo feels strongly about this and has expressed an opinion in the Media and in what form. How do we the people respond to what is offered to us, are we aware of what we risk by being involved. Is there a moral panic about identity theft worth developing? etc.
A great start but for the REAL THING, try to collect a number of different elements together and begin posing questions and making hypotheses.
Very good use of statistics and great layout
ReplyDeletea lot of research which is relevant to your CI
Great work maybe more examples of primary and secondary sources such as problems or an article which talks about stalking which can help to back up your information even more.
secondary sources such as newspaper articles would be good.
good use of Bibliography
also maybe read over your work and make sure you understand it :) x
Good notes.. write information in your own words and include examples of secondary and primary sources that you will be using.. The bibliography is good :)
ReplyDeletewell linked to your LP. good research but maybe more detailed research to come? keep up the good work
ReplyDeletethis is a good piece of work however you need to include primary and secondary sources. moreover it is clear.
ReplyDeletegood work :-) .
Really interesting facts and figures and well presented, but not a CI plan.
ReplyDeleteebi: I am unclear about your miniCI's objective. Is it to explore the Marshall McLuhan quotation: "Publishing is a self-invasion of privacy." If so then you could be onto something here. You would however need texts not just research data. Think about how our world is being shaped by Facebook and social networking. WHo feels strongly about this and has expressed an opinion in the Media and in what form. How do we the people respond to what is offered to us, are we aware of what we risk by being involved. Is there a moral panic about identity theft worth developing? etc.
A great start but for the REAL THING, try to collect a number of different elements together and begin posing questions and making hypotheses.