www You have tried to answer all the questions and engage with the text we saw. You have used some terminology to explore the questions and made come conclusions
ebi You do have a tendency NOT to check your work carefully enough and this often means that your writing contains a lots of errors which can confuse the reader. Also you have tended towards admiring the text rather than de-constructing it. When considering questions like the one about society you are being asked to place the film in its social context. This requires the most developed answer of all the questions but has been given the least time. As an A2 student this should be the area you are working on more.
Move from denotation to connotations to exploration of SHEP and wider discussions about issues in society.
You might for example have identified the issues of parental control, bullying, religion or alcohol and more...
Well done Yancia.
ReplyDeletewww You have tried to answer all the questions and engage with the text we saw. You have used some terminology to explore the questions and made come conclusions
ebi You do have a tendency NOT to check your work carefully enough and this often means that your writing contains a lots of errors which can confuse the reader. Also you have tended towards admiring the text rather than de-constructing it. When considering questions like the one about society you are being asked to place the film in its social context. This requires the most developed answer of all the questions but has been given the least time. As an A2 student this should be the area you are working on more.
Move from denotation to connotations to exploration of SHEP and wider discussions about issues in society.
You might for example have identified the issues of parental control, bullying, religion or alcohol and more...